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Is it really as poorly written as I’ve heard? some one told me there are entire pages that make absolutely zero sense and the english is that of a doorknob.
Heres a phrase/word count on the first book:
Cocks/cocked head to the side:21
*insert number* shades of *insert random word*: 27
Holy crap:38
Oh My: 56
Inner Goddess:57
Mutter/muttered: 63
My subconscious: 76
Murmur/murumured:100
Here’s some extracts I found particularly funny:
He blows gently up the length of my sex (141).
In his bedroom, I hunt through a chest of drawers and find the hair dryer. Using my fingers, I dry my hair the best I can. When I’ve finished, I head into the bathroom.
I want to clean my teeth. I eye Christian’s toothbrush. It would be like having him in my mouth. Hmm… Glancing guiltily over my shoulder at the door, I feel the bristles on the toothbrush. They are damp. He must have used it already. Grabbing it quickly, I squirt toothpaste on it and brush my teeth in double quick time. I feel so naughty. It’s such a thrill (76-77). Umm, whahh?
And she says this to herself ?
I KNOW WHAT HE’S REALLY LIKE – YOU DON’T! – I scream at her in my head. I’m fully aware that her actions come from a good place, but sometimes she just oversteps the mark, and right now so far that she’s into the neighboring state. I scowl at her, and she pokes her tongue out at me… (352).
So it really was written by and illiterate mong……..will make a massive point of missing this then!
Maybe I’ll go get a copy. See what’s been getting my mum so excited. Did I say that out loud
My mum read them all to.
What 50 shades of grey…great all
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